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I Didn't Know (Free verse) by Bonehiss

I didn't know, The end would come so soon, And things would be so tough. I didn't know, How far I'd gone for nothing, All I had was not enough. I didn't know, How to make you happy, Or the way to win your heart. I didn't know, It was even possible, To be so wrong, Right from the start. I didn't know, I could feel so empty, So lost without a clue, Until I finally realized, I didn't know, You.

Christof 30-Oct-02/7:43 AM
Good non-cheesy rhymes, crisp rhythms, a snappy ending - good.




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