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Forbidden Love (Lyric) by beakism I dreamed of you again. You haunt my sleep.
My private ghost you are, sent here to keep
me up till I'm so tired I cannot tell
if I am still alive or gone to hell.
I know you're forbidden - it makes it worse
to know my heart's desire holds such a curse.
I love you, truly - you're all I need -
but never these emotions may I heed.
Forbidden love! Why must it be
that you, my love, are denied to me?
Why? Why am I marked a doomed man by fate?
Why must burgers make me put on weight?
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Posted: September 4, 2002 4:45 PM PDT; Last modified: September 5, 2002 3:02 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8847394 Overall Rank: 9921 Comments:
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4-Sep-02/9:03 PM
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i think i'm in forbidden love!
Normally I quite like bathos but the last line here is just a step too far. But this is pretty darn good
Why must the hamburgular tickle my prostate? 'whould have been a better way to finish. are you finished? that is all.
its not the burgers pal its you !
This poem was awful, til the end. Then it became very funny. Thanks for pulling me in.
The pleasure is all mine.
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