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Forbidden Love (Lyric) by beakism

I dreamed of you again. You haunt my sleep. My private ghost you are, sent here to keep me up till I'm so tired I cannot tell if I am still alive or gone to hell. I know you're forbidden - it makes it worse to know my heart's desire holds such a curse. I love you, truly - you're all I need - but never these emotions may I heed. Forbidden love! Why must it be that you, my love, are denied to me? Why? Why am I marked a doomed man by fate? Why must burgers make me put on weight?

Christof 6-Sep-02/7:59 AM
Normally I quite like bathos but the last line here is just a step too far. But this is pretty darn good




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