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Meaning (Free verse) by Ojiboch
Ticket the soul for too many woes Create a border for it to know Sound the alarm as much as you can Discard the pieces as they spread to the ground Think as little as you can, think as much as you know Get ready to defend that what you love the most Style your regret so it can't bother you Grab the quality of it all Leave behind the remnants for others to follow Pursue that dream you gave up once before Make it your own as much as you can Prove the existence of a tampered soul

Up the ladder: Forbidden Love
Down the ladder: Spanish fLie

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.571429
Weighted score: 4.8847394
Overall Rank: 9922
Posted: September 17, 2002 4:55 PM PDT; Last modified: September 17, 2002 4:55 PM PDT
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[7] DreamMachine @ 66.212.78.246 | 17-Sep-02/5:36 PM | Reply
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
[1] god'swife @ 209.178.178.58 | 17-Sep-02/10:07 PM | Reply
This is void of meaning. Line 6, your slip is showing.
[n/a] Ojiboch @ 66.81.156.187 > god'swife | 18-Sep-02/4:58 PM | Reply
I don't understand what you mean?
[10] RoseEyes @ 198.81.21.59 | 24-Sep-02/5:32 PM | Reply
I love this..... beautiful. Very encouraging. Thank you for sharing it!
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