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Free verse № 15740

Meaning

Member since 2002 · Posted 17 Sep 2002 · 4 comments

Ticket the soul for too many woes Create a border for it to know Sound the alarm as much as you can Discard the pieces as they spread to the ground Think as little as you can, think as much as you know Get ready to defend that what you love the most Style your regret so it can't bother you Grab the quality of it all Leave behind the remnants for others to follow Pursue that dream you gave up once before Make it your own as much as you can Prove the existence of a tampered soul

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[7] DreamMachine 17-Sep-02/5:36 PM Reply
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!
[1] god'swife 17-Sep-02/10:07 PM Reply
This is void of meaning. Line 6, your slip is showing.
[n/a] Ojiboch › god'swife 18-Sep-02/4:58 PM Reply
I don't understand what you mean?
[10] RoseEyes 24-Sep-02/5:32 PM Reply
I love this..... beautiful. Very encouraging. Thank you for sharing it!