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Spanish fLie

Member since 2002 · Posted 23 Sep 2002 · 12 comments

Si me dices que me amas yo se que no es la verdad. Cuando me dices que me odias yo se que has encontrado tu corazon. Si lloras cuando me cantas yo se que no es la verdad. Si ay tiempo me olvideras pero ya no ay mucho tiempo. Buscamos la manera de vivir por el dia y si nos encontramos, es en error. Todo que paso, se nos olvidera, y, yo se que no es la verdad.

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[6] <~> 23-Sep-02/3:41 PM Reply

no habla espanol.

[n/a] flatliner › <~> 23-Sep-02/7:44 PM Reply

that's ok I can't write it either...lol

[7] INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/3:50 PM Reply

Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7

[6] <~> › INTRANSIT 23-Sep-02/3:52 PM Reply

anybody wanna post a spoken file for us?

[n/a] god'swife 23-Sep-02/4:46 PM Reply

No entiendo. Todo esta demasiado confuso. El primer verso si se entiende, pero comensando con {si
ay tiempo me olvideras} no sera {si uviera tiempo me olvideras}? During the day we search for a way
to live/If we meet, it is by mistake/ Everything that happened, we shall forget, and,/I know it is not the
truth. (I don't understand what you're talking about).

[n/a] flatliner › god'swife 23-Sep-02/7:52 PM Reply

a product of my spanglish and a lazy lunch time.... my only excuse is maybe it will get some of you out there to post some coherent spanish work.

[n/a] nentwined 23-Sep-02/5:10 PM Reply

babelfish says:

If you say to me that you love I to me that it is not the truth. When you say to me that you hate I to me that you have found your heart. If you cry when you sing I to me that it is not the truth. If (ay olvideras) time me but no longer (ay) long time. We looked for the way to live by the day and if we were, it is in error. Everything that step, us (olvidera), and, I that it is not the truth.

I have no spanish. :)

[n/a] god'swife › nentwined 23-Sep-02/5:35 PM Reply

Es la mera verdad! Tu espanol es horible!

[6] <~> › nentwined 23-Sep-02/8:33 PM Reply

thank yew nentwined. you have more than me, even if is scarfed up offa some smelly ichthiosite. blech. who baited this hook, anyway?

[n/a] nentwined › <~> 23-Sep-02/8:35 PM Reply

here, you now have as much spanish as me: http://babelfish.altavista.com :) [and german and a whole host of other languages...]

[6] <~> › nentwined 23-Sep-02/8:41 PM Reply

i usually use google translate. just lazy this time, i guess. thanks for the link. google lacks some langs i often want--like latin. who says it's a dead language? how can it be? it's not, dammit! and now back to your regularly scheduled poemming.

[4] Tintagiles 3-Oct-02/10:56 AM Reply

Not sure I like it that, but the first stanza's quite good.