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Spanish fLie (Free verse) by flatliner Si me dices que me amas
yo se que no es la verdad.
Cuando me dices que me odias
yo se que has encontrado tu corazon.
Si lloras cuando me cantas
yo se que no es la verdad.
Si ay tiempo me olvideras
pero ya no ay mucho tiempo.
Buscamos la manera de vivir por el dia
y si nos encontramos, es en error.
Todo que paso, se nos olvidera, y,
yo se que no es la verdad.
Up the ladder:
Meaning
Down the ladder:
Gloria's stairwell circles up & down
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Posted: September 23, 2002 3:28 PM PDT; Last modified: September 23, 2002 3:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.8847394 Overall Rank: 9923 Comments:
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<~> @ 24.44.185.41
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23-Sep-02/3:41 PM
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no habla espanol.
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flatliner @ 209.179.138.45
> <~>
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23-Sep-02/7:44 PM
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that's ok I can't write it either...lol
Thanks zin, I was just kicking myself for not staying in spanish in H.S. It does seem to flow though.7
anybody wanna post a spoken file for us?
No entiendo. Todo esta demasiado confuso. El primer verso si se entiende, pero comensando con {si ay tiempo me olvideras} no sera {si uviera tiempo me olvideras}? During the day we search for a way to live/If we meet, it is by mistake/ Everything that happened, we shall forget, and,/I know it is not the truth. (I don't understand what you're talking about).
a product of my spanglish and a lazy lunch time.... my only excuse is maybe it will get some of you out there to post some coherent spanish work.
babelfish says:
If you say to me that you love I to me that it is not the truth. When you say to me that you hate I to me that you have found your heart. If you cry when you sing I to me that it is not the truth. If (ay olvideras) time me but no longer (ay) long time. We looked for the way to live by the day and if we were, it is in error. Everything that step, us (olvidera), and, I that it is not the truth. I have no spanish. :)
Es la mera verdad! Tu espanol es horible!
thank yew nentwined. you have more than me, even if is scarfed up offa some smelly ichthiosite. blech. who baited this hook, anyway?
here, you now have as much spanish as me: http://babelfish.altavista.com :) [and german and a whole host of other languages...]
i usually use google translate. just lazy this time, i guess. thanks for the link. google lacks some langs i often want--like latin. who says it's a dead language? how can it be? it's not, dammit! and now back to your regularly scheduled poemming.
Not sure I like it that, but the first stanza's quite good.
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