Replying to a comment on:

Meaning (Free verse) by Ojiboch

Ticket the soul for too many woes Create a border for it to know Sound the alarm as much as you can Discard the pieces as they spread to the ground Think as little as you can, think as much as you know Get ready to defend that what you love the most Style your regret so it can't bother you Grab the quality of it all Leave behind the remnants for others to follow Pursue that dream you gave up once before Make it your own as much as you can Prove the existence of a tampered soul

DreamMachine 17-Sep-02/5:36 PM
OoooOOOh! Weeeee! " Oh look ma, A rollercoaster ride! ( -Excuse me for a minute while I go hurl now please! ) " I can really feel this one and it really has a lot of ups and downs not to mention a few loop 'de' loops to really throw your mind and heart into a spin!




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001