Re: Thanksgiving Dream Sequence by Venus	2-Oct-02/11:55 PM
fucking perfect, between love and hate; between holidays; betwwen adolescenece and despair. fucking perfect.
Re: Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus	2-Oct-02/3:07 PM
you, sirrah, are neither a gentleman nor a scholar, and that's exactly why i want you.
Re: a comment on Ode to Molly by knickytoy	2-Oct-02/3:04 PM
you would prefer a cat-poem? this, sirrah can be arranged. nice job, knicky. is Suzu jealous?
Re: a comment on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>	2-Oct-02/3:01 PM
i bought a violin bow there--or should i say 'fiddle'? ;]
Re: a comment on Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~>	2-Oct-02/2:59 PM
i'm gonna go have me some rare steak, and make up for lost time. i love it when somebody else pays for me to learn, but damn, i better have lunch in the hotel tomorrow, because i don't think i can leave once i sit down to the music. shit. temptation on all sides.
Re: Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus	30-Sep-02/3:54 PM
what, you don't call, you don't write--how was the show? all right?
Re: a comment on At The Sloane Slattery on Saturday by Limness	30-Sep-02/3:51 PM
and i bet you'd want more when she was done.
Re: Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus	30-Sep-02/3:41 PM
just get a little bottle, and you'll be okay
Re: always the end to this good night by nentwined	30-Sep-02/3:39 PM
weaves and bobs aprropriately.
Re: Sight by monotype	30-Sep-02/3:38 PM
welcome, monotype. don't need the title twice, otherwise i can find no fault with this poem. it blacks me blue, too.
Re: Can't See by ThoughtfulSoul	30-Sep-02/12:15 PM
try banging your head against a wall. then you can see colors, too, and not just black.
Re: the room's a'spinnin' by nentwined	30-Sep-02/12:12 PM
i want more impact on line 3, pretty please.
Re: Bobbing for Apples by Rex Karrs	30-Sep-02/9:33 AM
more's the pity--he'll be having his eye on another prize, won't he?
Re: Char by Amelia	27-Sep-02/10:23 PM
amalea, please understand that i do not mean this to be mean, but you should not use words that you don't understand. you have a LOT to say. you are very fiery in your rebuttals, and part of the reason you are teased/drawn out/whatever is that you do fight back. why not write in your own words? there is much beauty to be had in everyday things, and you are young and have a fresh and optimistics eyes. write about the boys who vie for you. they entertain and flatter you. but please, don't try to write to impress. write to communicate. you are good at it, but in adopting these style which do not fit you, you do yourself a disservice. peace. z
Re: Hunter's Moon by Rex Karrs	27-Sep-02/8:53 PM
by the way, this is quite beautiful.
Re: beauty of senses by apples_tim	27-Sep-02/7:58 PM
i'm wondering why one would write yet another sunset poem, without a very specific something to say? i almost feel like you are asking us to live this moment for you. you lived it--you tell us what irt was like, okay?
Re: Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/7:55 PM
lenore, i like this, but i feel like you have mixed strong metaophor in with some much weaker passages. i would like to see it hones and stronger, more like an incantation: direct and powerful, as it could well be.
Re: a comment on Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/7:53 PM
it is not to be missed, mrs.g. it is simple and effective. and science fiction.
Re: a comment on Witch to Wicca by Lenore	27-Sep-02/7:50 PM
frass, skyclad rocks, although i'm not much for cloudbursting. 'tis child's play. speaking of popping up, where have you been lately? z
Re: esopus creek by unknown	27-Sep-02/7:31 PM
damn wriggling winker got away again, didn't he? the wee bastard!