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beauty of senses (Free verse) by apples_tim
Hear the ocean waves crash upon the shore
feel the mist caress your face
taste the salt as you adore
the sunset disappear without a trace
Feel the sand between your toes
and watch the light illuminate
the faces that manipulate
all the truth we know
Watch the seagulls soar atop
sing their hearts to bliss
hold your breath, just stop
not a second you want to miss
Now all senses are astir
your body comes forth with zest
(can't seem to find the better ending for this poem)
( any suggestions....)
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Posted: September 27, 2002 7:16 PM PDT; Last modified: September 27, 2002 7:16 PM PDT
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