poemranker ::beauty of senses by apples_tim

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Free verse № 17750

beauty of senses

Member since 2002 · Posted 27 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

Hear the ocean waves crash upon the shore feel the mist caress your face taste the salt as you adore the sunset disappear without a trace Feel the sand between your toes and watch the light illuminate the faces that manipulate all the truth we know Watch the seagulls soar atop sing their hearts to bliss hold your breath, just stop not a second you want to miss Now all senses are astir your body comes forth with zest (can't seem to find the better ending for this poem) ( any suggestions....)

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[n/a] <~> 27-Sep-02/7:58 PM Reply
i'm wondering why one would write yet another sunset poem, without a very specific something to say? i almost feel like you are asking us to live this moment for you. you lived it--you tell us what irt was like, okay?