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Witch to Wicca (Free verse) by Lenore
You snap your hair back like a child's,
Don your costume of whatever's clean,
And get to work
Ceremonies are redundant
When every minute is a hurried whisper
To the Goddess who exists only
Because someone has to be the object of your prayers
Candles and chalk circles turning in about points
That lead to a surging center
You diffuse your power evenly as your life
Spreads at its edges like somebody's
Spilled gasoline
Fire: never-ending sun
Air: circling the dust before the storm
Water: sweat-tinged rain pouring down
Earth: you fall and caress it
As it turns to mud despite your tearless eyes
And, like a child knocking on the door
Of the house that doesn't like children,
You turn confused and wide-eyed
To no one
For your God is not;
And magic only works when you learn that.
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Weighted score: 5.7310586
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Posted: September 27, 2002 10:49 AM PDT; Last modified: September 27, 2002 10:49 AM PDT
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What do you mean you can feel the witches burning? Perhaps the meaning of the poem is not as clear as I thought.