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Sight (Free verse) by monotype
Sight
Blacken me away gray scale
from top to bottom.
Ocean me in dust
from far far away.
Black scrape on my skin,
tear charcoal dreams away
and boots kick harder
when blackened at night.
Nothing seen but smoky black.
Electricity moving on
to my dreary days
shadow on, shadow to,
rub more on for the effect.
Smudge and re-smudge,
make me black and lesser blue.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.125
Weighted score: 5.0336175
Overall Rank: 7225
Posted: September 30, 2002 10:47 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 10:47 AM PDT
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