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Sight (Free verse) by monotype

Sight Blacken me away gray scale from top to bottom. Ocean me in dust from far far away. Black scrape on my skin, tear charcoal dreams away and boots kick harder when blackened at night. Nothing seen but smoky black. Electricity moving on to my dreary days shadow on, shadow to, rub more on for the effect. Smudge and re-smudge, make me black and lesser blue.

<~> 30-Sep-02/3:38 PM
welcome, monotype. don't need the title twice, otherwise i can find no fault with this poem. it blacks me blue, too.




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