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Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville (Free verse) by <~>
Today's sacrifice was lunch at the sportsbar
With the boss. The only game I wanted to see
This noontime was the singing hoping humming
Up there on a low and splintered dias,
With a beat-up amp and a dream still kicking
But maybe not so hard as yesterday
When it was bared for the same semi-empty faces
Looking for something more
Than a drink and a song and pulled pork.
Robert's Western World, The Stage, and
Tootsie's Orchid (with two stages),
Bill and Layla's Bluegrass Cafe--
I walked by twice
But I won't tonight,
Every doorway a tempting darkened den
Taunting me with broken bars of song
Passing fast in the heat.
One beer into the day and wishing to remain
Here on Broadway, where it happens,
I trudge up the hill.
They're paying me to stay inside today
But that slide guitar honey is
Still dripping in my ears
And no matter how many power point slides I see,
They ain't the same;
None of them bite like that slow D minor did
When I rounded the corner up 4th
And cursed my own diligence.
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.2
Weighted score: 5.381449
Overall Rank: 3243
Posted: October 2, 2002 2:51 PM PDT; Last modified: December 10, 2002 8:51 AM PST
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i love it when somebody else pays for me to learn, but damn, i better have lunch in the hotel tomorrow, because i don't think i can leave once i sit down to the music. shit. temptation on all sides.