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Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville (Free verse) by <~>
Today's sacrifice was lunch at the sportsbar With the boss. The only game I wanted to see This noontime was the singing hoping humming Up there on a low and splintered dias, With a beat-up amp and a dream still kicking But maybe not so hard as yesterday When it was bared for the same semi-empty faces Looking for something more Than a drink and a song and pulled pork. Robert's Western World, The Stage, and Tootsie's Orchid (with two stages), Bill and Layla's Bluegrass Cafe-- I walked by twice But I won't tonight, Every doorway a tempting darkened den Taunting me with broken bars of song Passing fast in the heat. One beer into the day and wishing to remain Here on Broadway, where it happens, I trudge up the hill. They're paying me to stay inside today But that slide guitar honey is Still dripping in my ears And no matter how many power point slides I see, They ain't the same; None of them bite like that slow D minor did When I rounded the corner up 4th And cursed my own diligence.

Up the ladder: Band Ten Hut
Down the ladder: Equestrian Dreams

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.2
Weighted score: 5.381449
Overall Rank: 3243
Posted: October 2, 2002 2:51 PM PDT; Last modified: December 10, 2002 8:51 AM PST
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[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.72 | 2-Oct-02/2:55 PM | Reply
Boy I hate erring on the side of safety! But then it's safer that way. How redundant.
[n/a] <~> @ 64.12.96.234 > INTRANSIT | 2-Oct-02/2:59 PM | Reply
i'm gonna go have me some rare steak, and make up for lost time.
i love it when somebody else pays for me to learn, but damn, i better have lunch in the hotel tomorrow, because i don't think i can leave once i sit down to the music. shit. temptation on all sides.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.188.7 > <~> | 2-Oct-02/3:03 PM | Reply
Confucious say: If one does not feed soul occasionally, one dies soon.
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 | 3-Oct-02/7:37 AM | Reply
Can you get me a rhinestone cowboy suit while you're there? A white one with a big hat? Thanks.
[8] INTRANSIT @ 205.188.209.77 > Christof | 6-Oct-02/4:25 PM | Reply
I think you're confusing Tennessee with Texas. I'll bet you want some longhorns for your caddy too.
[8] Christof @ 195.172.133.226 > INTRANSIT | 7-Oct-02/1:27 AM | Reply
Absolutely I do. Sorry if I've insulted Tennessee in any way...
[n/a] knickytoy @ 24.45.19.89 | 3-Oct-02/12:04 PM | Reply
Have you spied the King? I lke the broken bars esp.
Is boothed a gerund?
[8] god'swife @ 209.179.135.62 | 10-Oct-02/7:46 AM | Reply
I can always count on you to make things interesting. You communicate emotion through concrete images, my favorite.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Jan-03/12:07 AM | Reply
Looks like some dilrod was peeing on the wall here..well well..he's still here..hey! fucker what gives with the six? hiee yah! <baba kicks it three feet off of the ground square in the nuts>
that's right mother fucker i mean serious shit fucker...unless you got the chops scat lest i whoop on yea a bit....capeesh? 10!
oh yeah...what commercial do you hate
and what's your favourite cereal?
[n/a] <~> @ 67.84.171.238 > <{Baba^Yaga}> | 17-Jan-03/9:58 PM | Reply
thanks for cleaning that up for me, sweetie.

i hate that dunkin donuts commercial that has an alarm clock in it. thankfully, they have stopped airing it. i really don't watch much television. never really home. i'll watch forensics, travel channel, or the dead zone if i am.

my favorite cereal is golden grahams. with apple juice instead of milk. but, i never eat cereal anymore. or bread, much really. i eat a lot of vegetables, and i eat more chicken any man ever seen. yeah.
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