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Can't See (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul All I see is black
All I see is nothing
All I feel is despair
They tell me "well at least your other senses are heightened"
And the truth is the only one that is strong is my feeling of hatred
God pointed his finger at me and just like that I see nothing
Faith is a funny word cause now I know there is no use having it
I'm glad I can't see cause that's the only thing keeping me from
pointing
and killing all these fucking people
Up the ladder:
I Don't Understand
Down the ladder:
The rendition (once bad movie night)
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Posted: September 30, 2002 9:38 AM PDT; Last modified: September 30, 2002 9:38 AM PDTWeighted score: 4.3948817 Overall Rank: 12993 Comments:
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30-Sep-02/12:15 PM
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try banging your head against a wall. then you can see colors, too, and not just black.
well how bout i tell you who to kill and you do it then! we would make a great team, and then when you tell the cops it wasnt you, you had someone telling you what to do, you couldnt point me out in a line up! damn this is just too perfect!
God's laughing at you. So am I.
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