Re: If God Was a Nihilist by baughworm	19-Feb-05/10:24 AM
nihilist: someone who rejects all theories of morality or religious belief
Re: stains by calliope	31-Mar-04/2:45 PM
I would change the title. I like the poem.
Re: The Hell With Growing Up by wilco	31-Mar-04/2:42 PM
how old are you that you have wasted away to such a tremendous degree?
Re: matador by ThePariahDog	31-Mar-04/2:32 PM
too wordy for my tastes.
Re: A wicked rose grows in God's grapevine. by SupremeDreamer	31-Mar-04/2:30 PM
Some of your references seem a little to cliche. The wind always whispers and caresses. Everyone's spirit has a beast. Try some different language. Especially the first line. It was a bit of a turn off. The end was much better.
Re: Over Simplification by Richard	31-Mar-04/2:26 PM
I agree. It needs more work, but good start
Re: Janine (a set of haikus) by capachijim	15-Jun-03/11:43 PM
put away the thesaurus
Re: Baginga by JoyLuck	15-Jun-03/11:37 PM
this is not very good
Re: Jellybean Land by JoyLuck	15-Jun-03/11:34 PM
are you 11 years old or some sort of super genius writing to fuck with the minds of the inferior?
Re: Baginga by JoyLuck	10-Jun-03/12:14 PM
Brilliant piece of writing.
Re: The Drunkest ever by horus8	9-Jun-03/10:04 PM
but ?UNFORTUNATLEY? I can't remember who in the hell you are anyway. it sounds as though its more fortunate than not. Otherwise I love this poem. VERY real. Great work.
Re: a comment on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm	9-Jun-03/9:54 PM
I didn't mean straddling, but simply the mechanical rocking motion of the horse. I used the horse because it has that straddling associated with it, but more directly I was only going for the actual rocking motion. Thanks
Re: a comment on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm	7-Jun-03/3:20 PM
Thank you
Re: a comment on A Perfectly Reasonable Question by baughworm	7-Jun-03/12:36 PM
I didn't mean for it to be a kid, but keyhole seemed to fit better than any other way of catching your lover cheating on you. If you can give any ideas i would appreciate it.
Re: Life's Loves Lost by Jigg	23-May-03/3:35 PM
The language is in need of some maturing, but the ending is good. Still needs work, but moving along.
Re: i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america	20-May-03/9:37 PM
beautifully written
Re: Over beast by Crakyamuni	20-May-03/9:34 PM
very young sounding
Re: One Moment to the Other (v2) by nentwined	20-May-03/9:33 PM
heading towards something great
Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi	20-May-03/9:32 PM
That is terrible, but then again...6
Re: Bitter Breakfast by nugit15	19-May-03/5:43 AM
when there "were" words?