Life's Loves Lost

Member since 2002 · Posted 3 Feb 2003 · Edited 4 Feb 2003 · 13 comments

No one has ever really liked me No one has ever really said Affection hasn't ever came my way On this lonely path I tread At times it gets me down At times I shrug and laugh it off I feel I need to leave this town At times this life's too rough I guess there was this one love I guess I was naive I'll never ever do that stuff That's why I gotta leave No one has ever loved me No one has even tried No one will ever set free The love I have inside I'll only love this someone This someone, she'll never know How much she hurt this no-one The day she just said no.

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[6] deleted user 4-Feb-03/3:17 PM Reply

how sad :(

[6] PK 4-Feb-03/7:30 PM Reply

aww...

[3] x311 8-Feb-03/8:05 AM Reply

I can relate to the sentiment, but it seems like it was written in the style of a fifth grader who just got shot down by his crush. If you're a fifth grader--good job! If not.....uhh, better luck next time.

[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-Feb-03/12:14 PM Reply

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[8] horus8 13-Feb-03/9:10 PM Reply

The day she had to go
or, the day that she said, "no".
would finish this stronger, perhaps?

[7] Sapphire 17-Feb-03/9:09 PM Reply

universal isn't it?

[10] H0LL0WxL1F3 4-Mar-03/6:48 PM Reply

Very nice. Talent overflow! You rawk.

[9] lunar 5-Apr-03/1:15 PM Reply

Really good i know what you mean completly -9-

[1] suckmychucks 14-Apr-03/1:56 PM Reply

you like tomatos in your salad? then, quick - GRAB YOUR ANKLES!

[7] BleedingRose 23-Apr-03/6:46 AM Reply

Great poem. It's quite vague in some parts, then again it's hard to be specific on such a topic. I feel can really relate to lines 13 and on.

[6] baughworm 23-May-03/3:35 PM Reply

The language is in need of some maturing, but the ending is good. Still needs work, but moving along.

[3] RealmOfSong 10-Jun-03/11:28 AM Reply

love sucks.

[7] crwncka1 7-Jul-03/11:02 AM Reply

I hear ya