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Life's Loves Lost (Lyric) by Jigg

No one has ever really liked me No one has ever really said Affection hasn't ever came my way On this lonely path I tread At times it gets me down At times I shrug and laugh it off I feel I need to leave this town At times this life's too rough I guess there was this one love I guess I was naive I'll never ever do that stuff That's why I gotta leave No one has ever loved me No one has even tried No one will ever set free The love I have inside I'll only love this someone This someone, she'll never know How much she hurt this no-one The day she just said no.

x311 8-Feb-03/8:05 AM
I can relate to the sentiment, but it seems like it was written in the style of a fifth grader who just got shot down by his crush. If you're a fifth grader--good job! If not.....uhh, better luck next time.




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