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Life's Loves Lost (Lyric) by Jigg

No one has ever really liked me No one has ever really said Affection hasn't ever came my way On this lonely path I tread At times it gets me down At times I shrug and laugh it off I feel I need to leave this town At times this life's too rough I guess there was this one love I guess I was naive I'll never ever do that stuff That's why I gotta leave No one has ever loved me No one has even tried No one will ever set free The love I have inside I'll only love this someone This someone, she'll never know How much she hurt this no-one The day she just said no.

baughworm 23-May-03/3:35 PM
The language is in need of some maturing, but the ending is good. Still needs work, but moving along.




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