Re: a comment on My word, her word, and yours by thepinkbunnyofdoom	24-Feb-05/3:14 AM
Really, what good have my words done the for starving children in Africa. Until the previous sentence nothing, and even then, they merely point out the existance of starving children in Africa. Our words mean what we want them to mean, and nothing more, nothing less. In this case, nothing at all. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Almost One by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Feb-05/1:36 AM
Special, yeah. That what my mommy says any way yepper roni I'm mommy's special boy uh huh I am.
Re: a comment on Yes, D.A. Private Eye Guy by Luzr	13-Feb-05/11:31 AM
What do you expect, I was just a little drunk, by little a mean alot, when I wrote this. <3 Jason
Re: Orion takes aim by oneglove	13-Feb-05/11:11 AM
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
Re: a comment on James The Dashing Pirate by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-Feb-05/2:01 PM
Rhyming it would steal from it content, and as you said, its all about the subtle highlights. The first line is just that. A hook. The golden heels. A lot is ment by that. A) Head/heels, a play on the classic head over heels. B) Heads become heels and his heels become gold. Two key words. Head, Gold. (He is a blond) C) Gold is something that is coveted. James is coveted. D) Lets not reveal all the mystery shall we? Later Daze <3 Jason
Re: Psalm of Wonder by Dovina	31-Jan-05/12:17 PM
I disagree. It does work on an emotional level.
Re: a comment on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jan-05/5:52 PM
Actually The Male Character does it. Its part of the short coming to livejournal near you soon. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Half a dozen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jan-05/2:30 PM
One extra? and yes 6 roses, they were dipped in wax, pink my favorite color and ment to be a suprize that ended up in the trash. <3 Jason
Re: a comment on The Difference by thepinkbunnyofdoom	26-Jan-05/2:24 PM
Jesu loves you my son? lol. yea, a bit preachy, but sometimes thats how the best conversations are. <3 Jason
Re: Conjugate the verb by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	21-Jan-05/11:23 PM
Hows can you even consider this to be free verse. More like "other", or perhaps, Caged Verse. Either way, I thought it was crap. But eh? What do I know.
Re: In The Beginning by Dovina	16-Jan-05/1:38 AM
LOL
Re: Poemranker I Couldn't stay Away by Tara57	10-Jan-05/6:27 PM
Wow, looks like you got hit by the harsher side of the ranker.
Re: The Wall is Crying by daggatolar	10-Jan-05/10:44 AM
Harsh on the thought required to so much as understand what the fuck your talking about. No Offense. Thought it was bad ass as far as Imagines, but I draw no real meaning out of this. -8- for now.
Re: The Poet's Plight by dougsoderstrom	10-Jan-05/10:32 AM
First verse, loved/magical things were expected, and then second and third were like I got shit on while pondering the beautiful imagine lain before.
Re: Draw Me A Pretty Picture by cuddlytiger17	9-Jan-05/4:20 PM
Damn, what I wouldn't give for a drunken down on his luck suicidal wino right now, a crayon, and some extra copies of this this to draw on the back of in case he has a couple of buddies :0 In other words, very moving <3 Jason
Re: Existential questions by kawakurdi	9-Jan-05/4:10 PM
Forced rhyme helps drive it well. <3 Jason
Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-05/7:05 PM
"Moslem, becoming," just few typos, lots of forest gump rip offs, and a couple of rereads where spacing and metaphors, and spell check come into play
Re: War Story by dougsoderstrom	8-Jan-05/6:55 PM
Have you ever heard of the difference between a letter and a poem?
Re: a comment on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Jan-05/6:43 PM
yes, I know typos.
Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Jan-05/6:42 PM
Now thats original. No mistaking that for some one else's qoute, what so ever. Seriously nice parity. <3 Jason