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Disable (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
All butler's are handicapped. They only have one hand.

Up the ladder: A Choice
Down the ladder: Forbidden

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.0
Overall Rank: 1301
Posted: December 22, 2004 10:59 AM PST; Last modified: December 22, 2004 10:59 AM PST
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[n/a] jroday @ 204.215.34.34 | 22-Dec-04/11:58 AM | Reply
To your comment on my brother poem is about our mother It wasn't meant to be taken that way. It was about our mother trying to raise six kids before she died.
My father is handicapped he has complex Partial Seizures. He just had his second brain surgery in nov.
he was doing fine until the other day,he had another seizure, and now he's in a coma. so I know how you feel, because I told him not to post that shit people
might take it the wrong way. By the way my father is jroday he talk about you and dovina alot he was ya'll
number fan on this site. I will be posting his poems
Felicia
[5] blacksoul @ 204.215.34.34 | 22-Dec-04/12:22 PM | Reply
Did'nt mean any harm man.
[4] Dovina @ 17.255.240.138 | 22-Dec-04/5:14 PM | Reply
Retibution is only exceeded in sweetness by ridicule.
[10] horus8 @ 24.130.62.63 > Dovina | 22-Dec-04/11:15 PM | Reply
Retribution, you asswagon.
[4] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 > horus8 | 23-Dec-04/6:31 PM | Reply

ass wagon, you retributor
[5] Bhaskaryya @ 61.0.144.80 | 30-Dec-04/9:17 AM | Reply
BUTLERS**** You are referring to many butlers not just one. Hence no apostrophes!!
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 216.196.150.43 | 8-Jan-05/6:42 PM | Reply
Now thats original. No mistaking that for some one else's qoute, what so ever. Seriously nice parity.

<3 Jason
yes, I know typos.
[10] Luzr @ 216.68.192.66 | 1-Feb-05/12:45 AM | Reply
Loved it. I made one just for you.

<3 Jason
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.52.31 | 8-Mar-05/5:32 PM | Reply
I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.153.196.50 > edpeterson | 9-Mar-05/4:09 AM | Reply
Are you talking about -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.'s reading of nentwined's appalling dumpling "Iterated Fuck" http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=40804 , or are you talking about the Dick Bumston readings? To my knowledge, there are no live links to any of these soilings, save the second Dick Bumston story, which is available here: http://jowls.org/audio/dickbumstonstory2.ogg . Access to "Iterated Fuck", the first dick bumston story, and "The Dick Bumston Groove Scenario" would have to be arranged via some predisclosed communications channel, such as an email address.
[n/a] edpeterson @ 68.79.52.31 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 9-Mar-05/6:46 AM | Reply
my email address is on my home page
[9] Caducus @ 172.203.166.88 | 25-Apr-05/4:04 AM | Reply
you crack me up
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