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Free verse № 118134

The Wall is Crying

by daggatolar

Member since 2004 · Posted 10 Jan 2005 · 2 comments

tears can no longer be water to sea The wall is crying our eyes inability to see our bodies sealed -in not drinking unable to wet we curse water to stones to eat sand only to haul all our land lives on the bare floor of a concrete solid flood and tears can no longer be water but bodies dripping to a drying desert dripping to see the sandback to sea the wall is crying and the sun is bleeding red eye

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[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom 10-Jan-05/10:44 AM Reply
Harsh on the thought required to so much as understand what the fuck your talking about. No Offense. Thought it was bad ass as far as Imagines, but I draw no real meaning out of this. -8- for now.
[7] Shuushin 11-Jan-05/2:26 PM Reply
As an excercise try to take out exactly half the words - gives you something like fourty to work with.

Try it.