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The Old Boat (Free verse) by Damon Mower
The old boat did not wreck itself
But required a constant checking in
With negligence. A grey rock,
Frost cracked, rolls into the scree.
The cool heron pecking at the silt
Feels winter in an empty beak.
Why does she not fear death
On those brittle, improbable legs?
The estuary inhales exposing
Its teeth as far as the green buoy.
I have the ebb tide dream
Of sailing that mud sunk old wreck.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.0
Weighted score: 5.0
Overall Rank: 7923
Posted: November 4, 2005 4:34 AM PST; Last modified: November 4, 2005 4:34 AM PST
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