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Orion takes aim

Member since 2004 · Posted 11 Feb 2005 · 3 comments

Orion takes aim Yet the brave warrior Cannot defeat the vast winter sky Our front row seats Are still miles apart But hidden somewhere is the comfort That weâre watching the same battle With common colors on our chests

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[7] MacFrantic 12-Feb-05/7:39 PM Reply

Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*

[5] wilco 12-Feb-05/8:41 PM Reply

I'm just not getting this. Maybe I'm not trying. Sorry, I just don't care tonight.

[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 13-Feb-05/11:11 AM Reply

Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-