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Orion takes aim (Free verse) by oneglove Orion takes aim
Yet the brave warrior
Cannot defeat the vast winter sky
Our front row seats
Are still miles apart
But hidden somewhere is the comfort
That weâre watching the same battle
With common colors on our chests
Up the ladder:
Privacy Compromised
Down the ladder:
Let this world crumble to dust without you
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Posted: February 11, 2005 11:27 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2005 11:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.313765 Overall Rank: 3567 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.67
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12-Feb-05/7:39 PM
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Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*
I'm just not getting this. Maybe I'm not trying. Sorry, I just don't care tonight.
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
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