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Orion takes aim (Free verse) by oneglove
Orion takes aim Yet the brave warrior Cannot defeat the vast winter sky Our front row seats Are still miles apart But hidden somewhere is the comfort That we’re watching the same battle With common colors on our chests

Up the ladder: I Don't Care

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3559
Posted: February 11, 2005 11:27 PM PST; Last modified: February 11, 2005 11:27 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] MacFrantic @ 152.163.100.67 | 12-Feb-05/7:39 PM | Reply
Oh, please get rid of L4. *7*
[5] wilco @ 24.165.207.93 | 12-Feb-05/8:41 PM | Reply
I'm just not getting this. Maybe I'm not trying. Sorry, I just don't care tonight.
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.42.248.89 | 13-Feb-05/11:11 AM | Reply
Give him about 4 more months, he'll at least have it running south. -9-
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