poemranker ::In The Beginning by Dovina

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In The Beginning

Member since 2004 · Posted 15 Jan 2005 · 5 comments

Big bang perhaps. In Your image? Uncertain thoughts Like particles’ locations? Random ideas As in mutations? Creator of chaos, I the result? A starting point, Do I ask too much? Hard questions later.

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5 comments

[8] Blindpoetry 15-Jan-05/8:10 PM Reply
Sounds like the yearly Bible Reader that always visited my Elementry and Middle School. lol

I didn't get the last line, though.
:-/
[n/a] Dovina › Blindpoetry 15-Jan-05/8:16 PM Reply
These are the easy questions, which if answered, lead to the hard ones.
[8] Blindpoetry › Dovina 15-Jan-05/8:18 PM Reply
ah.
Nice!

:)
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 16-Jan-05/1:38 AM Reply
LOL
[7] zodiac 17-Jan-05/5:42 AM Reply
I'm displeased to find you're back to your old self-righteousness. You were better when you didn't have all the answers. Kind of lovable, even, like a hamster.