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My word, her word, and yours (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
I never asked for this,
The attention I am given,
Or the focus I lack,
As you can tell, I'm losing focus
At the moment I'd rather say nothing
Let what comes, come and be
Apparently If I do though
You dig our graves with the quotations
Of a child, thinking of being a man
I am flattered with your words
But the art of candles and shadows
Is in the mystery of what you don't see
And the gathering of hints and riddles;
Things you barely see, but believe to be there
Fact, wrapped around in fiction
Say what you like, you would anyway
Think your words mean something to someone
Because they don't, neither do mine
So paint the picture as you see it
What will that change?
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.222222
Weighted score: 6.611111
Overall Rank: 592
Posted: February 23, 2005 6:22 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2005 6:23 PM PST
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