Re: a comment on Jealous over a maybe by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Dec-04/11:37 AM
No one said literate, and this is what I'd call a shitty off the top of my head poem. Sucks but meh? Its not I love you... I hate you... I can't live without you, so why I write about how wonderful you were shite. As for whether or not I lost her, that remains to be seen. <3 Jason
Re: Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom	29-Dec-04/2:15 AM
Fuck your "Buddhuist-oriented Christian Humanism", buddist don't believe in souls. And let me ask you Doug, What difference, huh? What? The fact that your writing crappy marked to crash and burn poems, yea you deserve capped on.
Re: Storms by Jeremi B. Handrinos	29-Dec-04/2:06 AM
Freaky twist at the end
Re: The Downfall of a Pagan Man by somemorepoetry	18-Dec-04/2:49 PM
Looks like somebody found them self a muse.
Re: a comment on Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom	21-Oct-04/4:30 PM
A Token is, an item used in place of something else. Tokin, is the smoking of hashish cigarettes(or in our case depending on your coastline pipes/bowls). Its placement was intentional, whether you choose to believe so or not.
Re: a comment on Fingernails by thepinkbunnyofdoom	21-Oct-04/4:25 PM
There is nothing sacred here at the ranker, I do tend to avoid such things but someone had to do it, and since I write alot of pimples I figured why not me.
Re: a comment on Youth by thepinkbunnyofdoom	19-Oct-04/5:06 PM
Thanks for your thoughts, I'm sure you thought 'quick' hard about this. "Token" is quite literally what we were doing in the back streets. Trust me 'speed of light' sounds a lot better than "going a hundred fifty two, not stopping for the lights red and blue", and the repetition is a reflexion(kinda of ties the title down). <3 Jason
Re: a comment on the monster by oneglove	15-Oct-04/2:00 PM
I would but I don't use instant messengers since this isn't my computer.
Re: a comment on the monster by oneglove	14-Oct-04/6:39 PM
"behind outward beauty" threw me for a curve on that one but yeah, but other than that I get it. So hows college life treating you? <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Archivist of Emotion by Dovina	14-Oct-04/6:35 PM
Like the imagines are missing links by slight misuses of syntax.
Re: Archivist of Emotion by Dovina	14-Oct-04/5:24 PM
illumined? Its nice writing but it sounds a little forced. <3 Jason
Re: the monster by oneglove	14-Oct-04/5:12 PM
Reminds me of alot of Beowulf. I would have called it Grendel.
Re: repeated sins, repeated prayer by oneglove	14-Oct-04/5:06 PM
Last Stanza, "Allow 'Your' grace", other than that, a nice prayer. -8-
Re: Solitude by Dovina	21-Sep-04/5:11 PM
Interesting to say the least.
Re: a comment on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-Sep-04/4:31 PM
The only thing owed me is a swift kick.
Re: a comment on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	8-Sep-04/4:31 PM
Question was asked, I pointed in the right direction. If that means I'm assuming someone was guilty of being hopelessly dim and unworthy, then I guess I'm such a judgemental bastard. Your Welcome dear, <3 Jason
Re: a comment on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	7-Sep-04/10:48 AM
Several meaning on the due. It could refer to her blood lining the grass like dew. Or it could refer to orgasmic body fluids. All depends on your perspective and how you interpert it.
Re: Into My World by sliver	7-Sep-04/9:52 AM
Loved the Renee Blue Eyes down the side bit.
Re: a comment on Director's Cut by New Life Drug	7-Sep-04/9:42 AM
Okay your missing several small details, "a smile that stops me in my tracks", "And sure enough like a deleted scene The best part of our story ended up on the screen", NLD is painting with words, poetry. True it could be better but not by much. I mean the starting out with a ryhme scheme and then doing away with it utterly until the end was a little jutting at first but it was better for his narration of the thoughts and feeling being displayed.
Re: End by Dovina	7-Sep-04/9:32 AM
Its amazing what you can do given the right circumstances. -9- <3 Jason