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Free verse № 111749

End

Member since 2004 · Posted 6 Sep 2004 · 9 comments

Surprised at my own ease and manufactured careless tone of voice, Surprised at my own lack of surprise at his announcement of departure. Our strained, but salvageable love, he determined ended, And instead of screaming or crying, I simply thought, “end.”

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[10] Dan garcia-Black 6-Sep-04/4:27 PM Reply
"Game Over" Good-est.
[n/a] Dovina › Dan garcia-Black 6-Sep-04/5:25 PM Reply
est = End of Stammerous Testing
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Sep-04/4:47 PM Reply
How delightfully aloof you must be!
[n/a] Dovina › -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 6-Sep-04/5:25 PM Reply
Silence is not aloofness.
[8] patty t 6-Sep-04/5:08 PM Reply
you fool. go get him.
[n/a] Dovina › patty t 6-Sep-04/5:26 PM Reply
Thanks, but sometimes it’s best to just move on.
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Sep-04/9:32 AM Reply
Its amazing what you can do given the right circumstances. -9-

<3 Jason
[n/a] Dovina › thepinkbunnyofdoom 7-Sep-04/9:41 AM Reply
It is not how I expected I would behave. Thanks.
[0] mr cunt 5-Mar-07/3:14 AM Reply
The best bit about this is that relief-giving word: "end".