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Yes, D.A. Private Eye Guy (Free verse) by Luzr
I love being the bunny Why? Because its who I am My Name Just like you have yours Jason is The Pink Fluffy Bunny Rabbit of Doom What an Arrogant Luzr I'd have to agree Him being me But I love the shit out of it anyway So go back to your butler's undergarments Instead of silently voicing childish comments We are both childish, but at least I have the balls to be honest about it You Kurt Vonagut Jr. Rip off. (apologises if I offend you for not taking the time look up the proper spelling of Kurt's name but eh? I'm lazy too, part of my brillance I'm told) Step up to the plate and say something about me I dare you on your honor as "an gentleman" Are you a man playing at being a boyishly anal or Nothing more than a silly old man, who gets off on whispers What do you have to say? <3 Jason

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.625
Weighted score: 5.9749126
Overall Rank: 1315
Posted: February 1, 2005 12:35 AM PST; Last modified: February 1, 2005 12:35 AM PST
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[n/a] Shuushin @ 147.154.235.53 | 1-Feb-05/10:58 AM | Reply
a swing and a miss.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 66.42.248.89 > Shuushin | 13-Feb-05/11:31 AM | Reply
What do you expect, I was just a little drunk, by little a mean alot, when I wrote this.

<3 Jason
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