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I (Free verse) by Rodavlas
I'm gonna come right out now and say it And I don't know how you're gonna take it. I've been talking to myself in the mirror And this conversation's been forever. I've been thinking hard about my own future And I've been questioning my own existence. Just what is my point in all of this mess Maybe this could be my final message To everyone I Love To everyone I Love

Up the ladder: Leaving Home
Down the ladder: Childhood memory

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.625
Weighted score: 5.9749126
Overall Rank: 1334
Posted: August 20, 2003 10:13 AM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 10:13 AM PDT
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[n/a] richa @ 81.86.250.253 | 20-Aug-03/12:04 PM | Reply
but I'll put it on poemranker anyway see what everyone thinks?
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