Re: Where's heaven? by cleverdevice	12-Apr-03/12:34 PM
Well said.
Re: RSPCA got here just a likkle bit late... by Yardbird	12-Apr-03/12:31 PM
If the Judge doesn't give 20 years I'll bust out my garden shears And stick'em up your rear :) -7-
Re: Okay, so it doesn't actually work, it's still shit-funny... by Yardbird	12-Apr-03/12:28 PM
I'm in stiches Cause of those bitches!! -8-
Re: A prayer for my mum by Mr Pig (again)	12-Apr-03/8:14 AM
I'm not a big fan of parents but this almost brings tears to my eyes. Very well written. It feels heart felt. Worthy of many more, a -10-!!!
Re: a comment on Road to Recovery by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Apr-03/8:04 AM
I may not be on the nicest of terms with D.A. but, That one poem alone is better than anything I have ever read, and more than likely, will ever read. It should be a 100 on a scale of tens. I'm glad you like this. At least enough to consider it almost worthly of a ten and I'll try harder next time.
Re: a comment on Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Apr-03/7:56 AM
Well it is a little cryptic but its actually just about staring at the sun.
Re: a comment on For Kristen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	12-Apr-03/7:54 AM
I'm not sure. If I watched it, Its been awhile since I've seen it. I only write in spurts so don't be too alarmed. Pretty soon I'll unable to write anything for months. Right now I write about 2 poems for every 3 days and I post about three aweek. /\ /\ / \/ \ * * " Here is a bunny. Not very cute but I call him Jason(thepinkfluffybunnyrabbitofdoom) just like me.
Re: What Hobbit songs are really like... by Bobjim	11-Apr-03/10:57 PM
Fine Fine Weed That You Smoke -9-
Re: Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig	11-Apr-03/10:55 PM
Excellent on so many levels. 10 in my eyes.
Re: I can't write by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:40 PM
I wouldn't say that just not well
Re: God's Gift by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:39 PM
I read this and You just seem to be repeating your other works. No new thought, no New way of expressing the same thought.
Re: Nothin lasts by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:22 PM
I think this sounds alot like some of your other work but still very touching
Re: Feeling the dark by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:08 PM
Been There ALOT. -10-
Re: Never get it right by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/10:01 PM
The wording at the end is a bit confusing. Try keeping to one tense per line(i.e. and why everything we did or said just hurts us more) either drop the s on hurts or change did and said to do or say. Lose the "it" and/or the "right" in the last line. They just muddle your point.
Re: All the things i hate by Mutant_X	11-Apr-03/9:52 PM
Somebody has been to block buster recently. Sounds a little too close to the movie. There are only 9 I hates tho. Why not add one and be that much closer?
Re: a comment on bottoms up by suckmychucks	11-Apr-03/8:49 PM
Why?? To be honest your not worth that much of my time. I gave you about 30 seconds out of my busy morning, which is quite nice of me I'd say and even that was too much.
Re: a comment on For Kristen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	11-Apr-03/3:41 AM
Only if you change it from Vilanelle. Cause Maria throughs The ryhme off. But for you go ahead. ;)
Re: a comment on bottoms up by suckmychucks	11-Apr-03/3:30 AM
I found this to be witty because, unlike your others,this one was quite funny. Maybe its because it is the name works so well, or maybe its just the image of someone drunk falling on their bum. Either way its much more humorish and has an appeal that the other pieces you wrote. Anyway there is clear mental image and a sense of FUN in its inmature nature. Your others lack in that fold.Therefore I deem this piece worthy of reading unlike the others. ;)
Re: ode to an english teacher by suckmychucks	10-Apr-03/5:16 PM
Why all the limericks?? Why must you shame the irish so?
Re: two flies by suckmychucks	10-Apr-03/5:10 PM
Not Very Witty Not Clever Enough to Be Gay A horrible piece I'm forced to say I wasn't amused in the least little bit Whining worse than even me Which is hard I'll admit A zero I'm afraid it has to be Thats all you get