Re: Shadow by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:45 PM
I like how you stick to one subject but this isn't all that great. -5-
Re: Deceased by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:43 PM
Sounds alot like something Mr.Pig wrote that I liked. -8-
Re: In Debt by talking_goldfish	18-Apr-03/12:39 PM
Just strange.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Apr-03/12:37 PM
And why ever not?
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Apr-03/12:36 PM
I never said that it wasn't questionable. I was merely showing the guidelines by which I was going. The experiance I'm describing is literally a decent into madness(of which D.A. is very right this poem is by and about a lunatic), this literally is one of my nightmares, put into words, at the best of my abilities at the present, of which I apologize if it doesn't fit into a ryhming lines or neat little stanzas, or most of the other niffy little rules that most people consider to be poetic. SO FEEL FREE TO QUESTION ITS STATUS AS A POEM AND GOOD EVENING TO YOU! o
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Apr-03/12:55 PM
Glad you like it D.A.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Apr-03/12:51 PM
A poem(as defined in a dictionary) is 1.A verbal composition designed to convey experiences, ideas, or emotions in a vivid and imaginative way, characterized by the use of language chosen for its sound and suggestive power and by the use of literary techniques such as meter, metaphor, and rhyme. 2.A composition in verse rather than in prose. 3.A literary composition written with an intensity or beauty of language more characteristic of poetry than of prose. 4.A creation, object, or experience having beauty suggestive of poetry.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	14-Apr-03/10:58 PM
Thanks for the advice. Any and all help in making this better is more than welcome.
Re: "E-V-O-L" by seven	14-Apr-03/6:59 PM
*hacks up a furball* huh?? hmmm??? wha? is it over yet? You lost my attention, about halfway through the first, Stanza/paragraph. It maybe the subject but It feels really repetive, like I've heard it before, redundent, cliche, and so on and so forth and what have ya. It might also be helpful if I could tell if you were being sarcastic with the live=evil rip off, or if you just thought it'd be cute and clever. I see that some effort was put forth(one way or another) and cause I have a real hard time with giving a zero to anything that has some effort, just for you a -2-.
Re: My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:23 PM
Once again confusing and I can feel my brain going into the redline so before it explodes -9-
Re: a comment on My pimp's ceiling fan by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:21 PM
God your a sick Beast lover! Whats the matter? You hate Gang Box? I think you need to get your ears tested. True I'll admit that J.B.H. isn't gonna be bumpin' out my stereo but Its not so bad as Animal rape(which I'm sure you order enough dvds of to tell the difference). P.S. If your going to do a 1-900- number make sure it has at least 7 letters or digits after it. As for the busy writing poetry bit? All I got to say How did you get those little wings?
Re: The Smarts aint Stupids by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:07 PM
My first reaction :WTF: My second reaction :what the bloody fuck: My third reaction :what a fuck: My fourth reaction :awe fuck If I'm this confused give it a -10- and try and sort it out later:
Re: a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik	14-Apr-03/1:02 PM
Nice screen play. It seems to center more on Emilio than Ferdinand tho. So why is Ferdinand the PRINCIPAL CHARACTER?
Re: Friends by anitawit	14-Apr-03/12:50 PM
A few typos(i didn't take off for them but they are there). Other than that nothing that really makes it stand out, but its still good. -7-
Re: You by adrenalize	14-Apr-03/12:47 PM
well said -7-
Re: Flash of Light by Todd	14-Apr-03/12:45 PM
To best see the light one must stand in shadow
Re: a comment on Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom	13-Apr-03/12:55 PM
and you thought the elephants were bad...
Re: Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins	12-Apr-03/12:47 PM
Take me with you.
Re: You Say by adrenalize	12-Apr-03/12:45 PM
Shame shame you have my permission to beat them with an old photo frame(no new ones cause why was something new) to the point of unconsiousness but no further! Its over when the lights go out! You Hear me! There are limits to how far you can go even when some one is that big an ANUS.
Re: The Warriors Song by cleverdevice	12-Apr-03/12:39 PM
Too much D&D for some body.