poemranker ::In Debt by talking_goldfish

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Free verse № 8008

In Debt

by talking_goldfish

Member since 2002 · Posted 8 Aug 2002 · 4 comments

Shivering. Cold. Til I met you, Then the warmth I fear, Became my soul. Frightened. Scared. When I met you, But the warmth I sense, Became my heart. Dizzy. Changed. Now Ive met you, And the warmth I feel, Is here to stay. Smiling. Warm. Since I met you, Its you I must thank, For the life youve borne. In debt.

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4 comments

[9] titan69 8-Aug-02/12:30 PM Reply
i like your style
its lot better than a lot of the crap done by 18 year olds over the
water.
[n/a] razorgrin 20-Aug-02/9:02 AM Reply
pheh. Makes more of an argument against love, really.
[7] thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-03/12:39 PM Reply
Just strange.
[n/a] talking_goldfish › thepinkbunnyofdoom 19-Apr-03/4:05 PM Reply
Why strange?