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In Debt (Free verse) by talking_goldfish Shivering. Cold.
Til I met you,
Then the warmth I fear,
Became my soul.
Frightened. Scared.
When I met you,
But the warmth I sense,
Became my heart.
Dizzy. Changed.
Now Ive met you,
And the warmth I feel,
Is here to stay.
Smiling. Warm.
Since I met you,
Its you I must thank,
For the life youve borne.
In debt.
Up the ladder:
DayDream
Down the ladder:
Friends Diminished
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Posted: August 8, 2002 9:44 AM PDT; Last modified: August 8, 2002 9:44 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3831 Comments:
pheh. Makes more of an argument against love, really.
Just strange.
Why strange?
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its lot better than a lot of the crap done by 18 year olds over the
water.