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DayDream (Free verse) by ThoughtfulSoul
Enjoying a great life Then waking up and finding out It's a dream Experiencing blue skies When there are really, dark clouds Loving someone Just to find out they don't love you The majority of your life is Just one huge DayDream That has finally decided to end

Up the ladder: Zanzibar
Down the ladder: In Debt

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3830
Posted: August 1, 2002 5:43 PM PDT; Last modified: August 1, 2002 5:43 PM PDT
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