Zanzibar

Member since 2002 · Posted 19 Jul 2002 · 2 comments

Coconut husks Fading moonlight Shimmering sands An Arab boy's kite Tropical shells Sweet sugar cane Women in veils Curious cranes Spices and sounds Scents untold Cardamon and Cloves Bought and sold Memories so sweet Poems to pour Like this little one About Zanzibar shore

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[8] silentcat 31-Jul-02/8:09 AM Reply

simple. elegant. kudos.

[5] nentwined 24-Aug-02/4:01 PM Reply

I didn't like the line "curious cranes" rhyming with "sweet sugar cane". and the self-reference was a bit much.