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Zanzibar (Free verse) by sunfloweronfire Coconut husks
Fading moonlight
Shimmering sands
An Arab boy's kite
Tropical shells
Sweet sugar cane
Women in veils
Curious cranes
Spices and sounds
Scents untold
Cardamon and Cloves
Bought and sold
Memories so sweet
Poems to pour
Like this little one
About Zanzibar shore
Up the ladder:
I would be happy to forget what day it is.
Down the ladder:
DayDream
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Posted: July 19, 2002 7:13 AM PDT; Last modified: July 19, 2002 7:13 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.2689414 Overall Rank: 3829 Comments:
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silentcat @ 129.120.97.123
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31-Jul-02/8:09 AM
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simple. elegant. kudos.
I didn't like the line "curious cranes" rhyming with "sweet sugar cane". and the self-reference was a bit much.
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