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I would be happy to forget what day it is. (Free verse) by cpill
I would be happy to forget what day it is. The day is so blue I would be Happy to be on the harbour to sail out of gates. in nature there are no seconds in time I would laugh freely at the Adventure of life Load. To idle in my own free will, And know the sun moves across the sky: and that is all, And know the seagull does not accuse me of waste To know and yet not to 'know'; as pigeons walk around me in their busy way. I would growl and eat and kill without a batter of the eye. If it weren't for reflection I would be free.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3828
Posted: July 9, 2002 8:06 PM PDT; Last modified: August 13, 2002 12:24 AM PDT
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