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Knuckle Bait (Free verse) by niyama
There must have been something about pigtails, or maybe it was just her grin that inspired the need for thumping and giving it on the chin Perhaps it was her size, the color of her eyes or the shorts beneath her skirt But those boys were just jumping to knock her to the dirt But she knew how to tussle to slug and kick and what else can I say? she may have been small but she had grit and some muscle and in the end SHE chased THEM away

Up the ladder: Eenie Meenie Minie Moe
Down the ladder: There is a journey tree

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3819
Posted: April 8, 2004 5:09 PM PDT; Last modified: April 8, 2004 5:09 PM PDT
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[8] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 8-Apr-04/5:36 PM | Reply
Should be more. Maybe less. I'm wonderin if maybe this could be combined with the one I just read...
[7] nentwined @ 66.92.28.14 | 8-Apr-04/5:39 PM | Reply
cute, but a little awkward towards the end.
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