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Knuckle Bait (Free verse) by niyama

There must have been something about pigtails, or maybe it was just her grin that inspired the need for thumping and giving it on the chin Perhaps it was her size, the color of her eyes or the shorts beneath her skirt But those boys were just jumping to knock her to the dirt But she knew how to tussle to slug and kick and what else can I say? she may have been small but she had grit and some muscle and in the end SHE chased THEM away

nentwined 8-Apr-04/5:39 PM
cute, but a little awkward towards the end.




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