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In Debt (Free verse) by talking_goldfish

Shivering. Cold. Til I met you, Then the warmth I fear, Became my soul. Frightened. Scared. When I met you, But the warmth I sense, Became my heart. Dizzy. Changed. Now Ive met you, And the warmth I feel, Is here to stay. Smiling. Warm. Since I met you, Its you I must thank, For the life youve borne. In debt.

titan69 8-Aug-02/12:30 PM
i like your style
its lot better than a lot of the crap done by 18 year olds over the
water.




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