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You Say (Free verse) by adrenalize You say
Your letters I must return,
I must return
Those nights, those memories
All the things we said
You say
You want them back
Just some withered flowers
In the books
A face
Thatâs still in my dreams
A few gifts
Some pictures
This is all
Iâm left with
The loneliness
Thatâs my only companion
And yet
You say
You want them back
The good times
The sorrows
The promises and vows
The seasons
All of them
The tears
The moments that time stood still
Each and every one
The loneliness
Thatâs my only companion
And yet
You say
You want them back
Up the ladder:
Originality
Down the ladder:
Of Growing
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Posted: April 11, 2003 8:16 AM PDT; Last modified: April 11, 2003 8:16 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6676 Comments:
Shame shame you have my permission to beat them with an old photo frame(no new ones cause why was something new) to the point of unconsiousness but no further! Its over when the lights go out! You Hear me! There are limits to how far you can go even when some one is that big an ANUS.
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Thatâs my only companion
And yet
You say
You want them back"
also, or too would be the last word probably 'too'.
then you could say... But that's something you can never have back, or unreturnable. and that would be putting your foot down nicely to conclude the piece.