poemranker ::Originality by shwenatjadeflower

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Free verse № 46857

Originality

Member since 2002 · Posted 10 Apr 2003 · Edited 10 Apr 2003 · 3 comments

I am made of Jade and Amethyst Two rare stones, two names that flow through my veins Rainbows and kites Garfeild too Penguins and plaid red matches blue "Outside of a dog a book is a mans best friend Insisde a dog it's too dark to see" ~Grouch Marx These are the things That make me who I am These are the things people know me for they remember my name and sometimes my face They always remember my originality.

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[8] horus8 10-Apr-03/10:34 PM Reply
Once, I almost choked to death on a frozen milky~way bar while naked on pcp in a Mcdonald's walkin cooler.
[n/a] Lord Ganus › horus8 10-Apr-03/10:58 PM Reply
I cop a feel, you cop a feel, he/she cops a feel, we cop a feel, they cop a feel, it cops a feel. The english language is a fool for staying cool by making it's words a little colder.
[7] Mr Pig 11-Apr-03/8:39 AM Reply
I enjoyed the opening but detest Marx, he used to scare me as a boy.