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Deceased (Free verse) by talking_goldfish
The day became the night,
The night became the day,
The birds, the birds,
They sang,
Somewhere far away,
An angel tried to scream,
Help, help,
She cried,
But no-one else would hear,
Far too far away,
The clouds, the clouds,
Went dark,
I never will forget,
The day that angel cried,
Now hark, now hark,
Deceased.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9807
Posted: August 11, 2002 10:56 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 10:56 AM PDT
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