Help | About | Suggestions | Alms | Chat [0] | Users [0] | Log In | Join
 Search:
Poem: Submit | Random | Best | Worst | Recent | Comments   

Deceased (Free verse) by talking_goldfish
The day became the night, The night became the day, The birds, the birds, They sang, Somewhere far away, An angel tried to scream, Help, help, She cried, But no-one else would hear, Far too far away, The clouds, the clouds, Went dark, I never will forget, The day that angel cried, Now hark, now hark, Deceased.

Up the ladder: Darkness
Down the ladder: A flow

You must be logged in to leave comments. Vote:

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
 GraphVotes
10  .. 00
.. 00
.. 10
.. 10
.. 00
.. 00
.. 00
.. 20
.. 00
.. 00
.. 10

Arithmetic Mean: 4.2
Weighted score: 4.904638
Overall Rank: 9802
Posted: August 11, 2002 10:56 AM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2002 10:56 AM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
[3] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 17-Apr-03/6:05 PM | Reply
Now hark, lark! bef're it's dark and your tail feather's bark turns into Noah's ark and we leave a mark of animal shit that will eventually nark us out to sweet jesu'. did i mention being stark fucking nude dude? well that too, buddy.
[8] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 18-Apr-03/12:43 PM | Reply
Sounds alot like something Mr.Pig wrote that I liked. -8-
143 view(s)




Track and Plan your submissions ; Read some Comics ; Get Paid for your Poetry
PoemRanker Copyright © 2001 - 2024 - kaolin fire - All Rights Reserved
All poems Copyright © their respective authors
An internet tradition since June 9, 2001