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Deceased (Free verse) by talking_goldfish

The day became the night, The night became the day, The birds, the birds, They sang, Somewhere far away, An angel tried to scream, Help, help, She cried, But no-one else would hear, Far too far away, The clouds, the clouds, Went dark, I never will forget, The day that angel cried, Now hark, now hark, Deceased.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 18-Apr-03/12:43 PM
Sounds alot like something Mr.Pig wrote that I liked. -8-




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