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Free verse № 46713

Road to Recovery

by thepinkbunnyofdoom

Member since 2003 · Posted 9 Apr 2003 · Edited 9 Apr 2003 · 10 comments

circles, circles, run round fall down, land on my pride stings but i’m fine leave me alone so what if i’m got a cut and a scrape it’s only here and there i’ll take care of it myself i don’t need your sympathy your words can only bring more pain i’ll recover or i’ll die both a sight that you don’t need to see

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A favorite of mystic enoch, thepinkbunnyofdoom.

10 comments

[6] Shardik 9-Apr-03/8:33 PM Reply
I agree, and once again, i plea on the large plant in Chaplin's solarium.
[0] suckmychucks 10-Apr-03/7:21 PM Reply
aw go fuck a salad shooter.
[9] NewbieMe 10-Apr-03/7:55 PM Reply
i’ll recover or i’ll die
both a sight that you don’t need to see

*hmmmm, you're right :)*
[1] lunar 12-Apr-03/6:30 AM Reply
Ooooh thats good. Not a ten because i will give nothing a ten after reading that poem by DA about the sausage roll - brilliant! i will instead give a -9- x
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › lunar 12-Apr-03/8:04 AM Reply
I may not be on the nicest of terms with D.A. but, That one poem alone is better than anything I have ever read, and more than likely, will ever read. It should be a 100 on a scale of tens. I'm glad you like this. At least enough to consider it almost worthly of a ten and I'll try harder next time.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › thepinkbunnyofdoom 28-Jun-03/11:21 PM Reply
This has got to be one of my favorites I've written. Mostly cause Its fun and it has real meaning to it. Its about how when you hurt somebody, you need to leave them alone to deal with it rather than constantly bothering them to make sure they are alright.
[9] deleted user 17-May-03/4:41 PM Reply
WOW
[4] blindwriter 3-Apr-05/11:12 PM Reply
i only like the ending.
the rest is cliche after cliche.
there's a bit here and there but not enough to stand out.
not bad or anything...just mediocre.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom › blindwriter 3-Apr-05/11:50 PM Reply
What can I say other than I've improved alot in since high school(When this was written).

<3 Jason
[n/a] deleted user 9-Jun-05/7:03 PM Reply
I don't want to spoil the party but I go along with Blindwriter. Agreed, due to the last lines the poem deserves a mentioning in the lower regions of the Best category, but the main part is mediocre, ànd with off-timing at the start ànd one moment of bad grammar. If this represents the best in poetry, I expect to be crowned King Genius within three weeks.