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God's Gift (Free verse) by Mutant_X
we are different,i don't doubt but we perfectly fit into each other to tell me something,u don't have to bother i know it when i look into ur eyes and there i see the clearest skies and i see the wole world rise to tell the story of our union we are different i don't doubt but it's not about me or you coz it's nothin that we choose to do i dunno why when u hold me it's like home i dunno why am i even writing this poem and i also dunno why when we kiss it feels like i'm leting go of everything but yet though it feels like the world form the palms of my hands, wouldn't subside i dunno why ur arms r my shelter when things go wrong all i know is that to you i belong maybe we can't be together but i'm urs till forever and once i was cryin,i was so sad everything was goin bad u told me,look up to the sky above how huge,how big it is and remember,i'm somewhere underneath that sky too lookin at it and thinkin of you we are different,i don't doubt but i'm a part of you and without u,nothin would do. guess i will always feel thankfull for god gave me u.

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.2
Weighted score: 4.7854347
Overall Rank: 11290
Posted: September 29, 2002 4:50 PM PDT; Last modified: September 29, 2002 4:50 PM PDT
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[0] Tintagiles @ 142.166.239.207 | 30-Oct-02/8:03 PM | Reply
I might have actually bothered to read this if there was a hint of correct spelling somewhere in it.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 | 11-Apr-03/10:39 PM | Reply
I read this and You just seem to be repeating your other works. No new thought, no New way of expressing the same thought.
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