Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jun-03/10:23 PM
Your opinion of my style and my style are 2 different things and my poem is what it is, MY POEM. How you feel about it is dandy, but in the end, that doesn't really matter. I made no real attempt at anything other than writing something to amuse myself, which it did, so in the end its purpose was served. There are actually serveral Ideas expressed here, much as you seem not to believe it. One of which being that innocense can be bought (Girl selling her virginity). Another being that being too trusting can end up getting you killed, as well as not knowing your limit (the whole biker, bar, drunk being burnt to death). Another great one being that Everything has a price (dignity). See Ideas, put into a blender with, Creativity, Insanity, A small dose of Humor(which even you have to admit is there at least on some level or else your lying to yourself). Pour into a glass(poetic story form) and You have yourself a niffy little Milkshake I like to call ack basswards or something like that. Muwahahahahahahaha
Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jun-03/3:27 PM
Very nice but entirely your style not mine. You really didn't do justice to the poor drunk whose clothing I stole, I rather liked portraying him being burnt to death, and I wasn't nude when arrested. Other than that your variance is frightfully good but not I still like my original better.
Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:42 PM
Deal. Go for it. I like it as it stands but eh? I'm a Kid. What the hell would I know? Seriously though give it a shot. Worst that could happen would be that you take an Idea I expressed and express it better than me and I'd be absolutly amazed. Though I'll try not to develop my own flavor to your "style" when you get done with it.
Re: a comment on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:34 PM
Another of my girl poems. This one isn't even about a girl I dated. How said is that. I do point out in this poem that I'm following the illogical part of my brain and that the logical part knows better.
Re: a comment on Dumb Ideas by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:30 PM
This poem is about trying so hard for something you want so bad but just before you get it you don't want it anymore.
Re: a comment on My Blues by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:28 PM
Previous comment says it all. Well other than that I'm not really black or even old enough to truly experiance the blues yet.
Re: a comment on Descent into Madness by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:27 PM
This as was later pointed out to me isn't really a poem. No beauty to it really. Poetic in a sense but only if you see it the right way. Its about my nightmare that I've had and still have anytime I have to choose between people or important things and its a tough decision.
Re: a comment on Looking Down by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:23 PM
This one is about trying to make something simple and mundane sound needlessly complicated, and interesting. Again more growing as a writer.
Re: a comment on Road to Recovery by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:21 PM
This has got to be one of my favorites I've written. Mostly cause Its fun and it has real meaning to it. Its about how when you hurt somebody, you need to leave them alone to deal with it rather than constantly bothering them to make sure they are alright.
Re: a comment on For Kristen by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:17 PM
Again another girl Poem. This one for my Kristie. I actually wrote it for her before we started going out. It started off as a lyric and I should have kept it that way but I really wanted to try a Vilanelle. I wrote it to see her smile. No other reason in the world. She was just my friend's sister to me at the time even though I liked her alot, even then(Actually since the moment we met to be honest). Its probably among my worst 5 poems to be brutally honest.
Re: a comment on Sublime Street Morals by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/11:01 PM
This Poem... Is about a girl. But I made it seem like it had a nice dramatic ending, instead of what really happened. (Note all the names have been changed)Tito as you can guess is me. Madoline is my ex-girlfriend whom is to this day putting me thru hell. Slader is a bastard that I thought If I acted like he didn't bother me then she'd let him fade into the background like he was supposed to. Damn me and being so trusting, in that girl. This seriously is the story of my life up until grabbing the gun and blowing my brains out. I did write a note that made her see things better when she was with me, but we aren't getting back together, she isn't dumping "Slader", and yeah as far as she is concerned I might as well have blown my brains out right in front of her.
Re: a comment on Day to Day by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/10:51 PM
This poem was just again, growing in style.
Re: a comment on We The People by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:43 PM
Just playing with font. Didn't care in the slightest one way or the other about the war. I do agree with my statement that divided we stand and united we'd fall. America is about divisity of well... everything. Rich as to Poor, Black as to white, all different. Otherwise we'd all be communist or some other form of facist to say the least.
Re: a comment on Thanks For The Brain Damage by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:39 PM
Girl poem. Written about how the oppsite sex has all these head games that men will never understand, and how I don't get them. They end up leaving me terribly confused and horribly angry for not getting the point.
Re: a comment on Who am I? by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:35 PM
Actually in retrospective I did mean hollow. Meaningless bull shit on trying to find myself, more about exploring being an artist and all that fun goo rather than any life message statement.
Re: a comment on Ment to be confusing by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:32 PM
Weird place, weird time. I can't even begin to phathom more than a guess at what I was saying. Its another poem on escaping reality.
Re: a comment on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:28 PM
This isn't about a city at all. Its about being cut off from everything and everyone. It came from thinking deeply on a bible verse about god's wrath. Old Testiment shiznic.
Re: a comment on Alphabet by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:21 PM
This is about seeking something that doesn't seem to exist, in away making fun of razorgrin(just slightly) and using my ABCs to cause I was trying to get more creative.
Re: a comment on Idiot Box by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/9:18 PM
This poem is just about wishing that someone would pull you away from yourself and make you happy when your feeling blue.
Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom	28-Jun-03/5:55 PM
Ah... but then I have to stand in line.