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Crush Rejected (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
My eyes bleed tears, But I did it to myself, I knew better, Than to pull my hope off my shelf, Cause you’re just a dream, A movie made inside my head, A wish upon a star, The El Dorado that I'll never find, Wasting time, Wasting time, I'm just a waste of time, So leave me be, I am who I am and thats nothing much, A whiny Emo kid who imagines too much, So don't waste your time, I'm just a waste of time I know its not your fault and I can’t blame you, After all what would that do, I know I’m just a waste of your time, So I won’t waste my breath, or mine, That doesn’t mean that I won’t dream, Doesn’t mean that when the film is done I won’t press rewind, Doesn’t mean that I’m gonna stop wishing, Doesn’t mean that I’m gonna quit searching, It just means that I’m sticking my hope back on my shelf, After all I did this to myself but it can’t be undone, So I’ll let my eyes bleed these tears till they are dry, And I’ll get on with my life.


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Arithmetic Mean: 7.5
Weighted score: 6.8276463
Overall Rank: 357
Posted: May 3, 2003 1:34 PM PDT; Last modified: May 3, 2003 1:34 PM PDT
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[6] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 4-May-03/7:10 PM | Reply
I cried or wept blood would be a stonger action.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.
I would change them but its all a reference to a conversation I had with a girl whom rejected me. But thanks for the advice.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 28-Jun-03/11:34 PM | Reply
Another of my girl poems. This one isn't even about a girl I dated. How said is that. I do point out in this poem that I'm following the illogical part of my brain and that the logical part knows better.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.102 | 5-Jun-03/3:54 PM | Reply
The phrase "my eyes bleed tears" is plagiarised from the following poeme by Roger Pfingston:

http://www.2river.org/2RView/5_2/poems/pfingston1.html
Actually it is a reference to stigmata, a movie I had watched with the individual this is about.
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