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Crush Rejected (Lyric) by thepinkbunnyofdoom

My eyes bleed tears, But I did it to myself, I knew better, Than to pull my hope off my shelf, Cause you’re just a dream, A movie made inside my head, A wish upon a star, The El Dorado that I'll never find, Wasting time, Wasting time, I'm just a waste of time, So leave me be, I am who I am and thats nothing much, A whiny Emo kid who imagines too much, So don't waste your time, I'm just a waste of time I know its not your fault and I can’t blame you, After all what would that do, I know I’m just a waste of your time, So I won’t waste my breath, or mine, That doesn’t mean that I won’t dream, Doesn’t mean that when the film is done I won’t press rewind, Doesn’t mean that I’m gonna stop wishing, Doesn’t mean that I’m gonna quit searching, It just means that I’m sticking my hope back on my shelf, After all I did this to myself but it can’t be undone, So I’ll let my eyes bleed these tears till they are dry, And I’ll get on with my life.

Jeremi B. Handrinos 4-May-03/7:10 PM
I cried or wept blood would be a stonger action.
The Eldorado reference sucks and so does the emo thing lose them, and then maybe you'll be closer. To what? I have no fucking clue.




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