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We The People (Other) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Divided W U E Stand n t i t e d W e F a l l B n M W r s n i T e e d y o d U t l h y A e r k n r B o e Twist everthing I say til the meaning dnuora denrut pu sdne A n d I ' l l S l i d e B a c k A n d F o r t h B Curl myself up in a l a l Roll to the edge of the screen and leap off......... Out of nowhere and lie about where I've been p o P Screw being United, This is The Divided States of America, Unity is for the commies So we'll mix words, and cry fake puppy dog tears, To play with our bombs, and shoot our guns Doesn't that sound like fun? Lie and cheat and steal and kill and kill and kill!!!! This is the real deal son So go die for your nation and don't expect any help from anyone You see my boy doesn't get to play with all these fun little toys I'm to old and Good old uncle sam needs my money So go take one for the team with my regards and esteem After all if you die it'll be in the defence of the American Dream Help those less fortunate then me umm... I mean yourself and your dignity

Up the ladder: The Song I Miss
Down the ladder: Lessons on being a man

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0625
Weighted score: 6.816644
Overall Rank: 377
Posted: March 23, 2003 11:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2003 11:15 PM PST
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Comments:
[7] bondjedi @ 216.163.73.66 | 24-Mar-03/7:37 PM | Reply
I like your poem. I don't know what that other comment is doing here.
[8] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 25-Mar-03/9:37 AM | Reply
Delete the comment jeremi left hes pasted it from a comment I LEFT on poetandknowits work, sorry for the inconvenience,

good work here by the way, I owe you some time in looking at more of yours as you have mine --8
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 > Caducus | 25-Mar-03/2:40 PM | Reply
Glad you like it
[1] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.106 | 26-Mar-03/9:45 AM | Reply
Yep. Tell me something that all the other schmucks aren't saying. Say it differently. repetitive.
[1] lunar @ 195.92.67.65 | 2-Apr-03/1:23 PM | Reply
Nice
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.19.37 > lunar | 2-Apr-03/1:46 PM | Reply
Oh. Yeah. To be honest I just wanted to play around With the edges of the screen. I could care less about the War really. It doesn't involve anyone close to me and barely affects me to date. Glad you like it tho.
Yeah well maybe if you were disabled you'd care a little more about the war, though frankly I doubt it. Webster's dictionary, in partnership with the federal chamber of commerce, defines a disabled as "that which requires an artificial harness with which to hoist itself upon things with". Given such a definition, I fail to see how your being disabled would have any bearing whatsoever on your opinions concerning the war.
Alrighty then. Thanks for your opinion D.A. and your right I'm not disabled(other than mentally and as the above clearly defines Thats not good enough) and It wouldn't change my view point what so ever.
[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 > thepinkbunnyofdoom | 28-Jun-03/9:43 PM | Reply
Just playing with font. Didn't care in the slightest one way or the other about the war. I do agree with my statement that divided we stand and united we'd fall. America is about divisity of well... everything. Rich as to Poor, Black as to white, all different. Otherwise we'd all be communist or some other form of facist to say the least.
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