Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
28-Jun-03/5:54 PM |
Well thats okay, It doesn't really make much sense anyway.
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Re: a comment on Ack Bassward, or something like that by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
28-Jun-03/5:52 PM |
No its just really illogical. A girl selling her virginity as if it was a tangible object as opposed to an action. It was mostly an example for later buying a man's dignity but I could see so many possible meanings being read into it.
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Re: -=Dark_Angel=- -=In_Decline=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/11:54 PM |
You still are D.A., You still are.
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Re: -=Dark_Angel_Is_No_Longer_Funny=- by wEdible Underpantsw |
26-Jun-03/11:48 PM |
You've got to be shiting me, or gold bricks. Which ever you prefer.
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Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Jun-03/4:57 PM |
Hmmm... D.A. getting personal. I don't act very British around her other than when I sing and I've yet to sing for her. No to the reading her poetry, and the rest of your statement is just bull shit(No wait lets use Briticism Bollocks). But thanks for giving me a laugh. D.A. other hating you to my utmost I find you to be one of the most one of the best sources of amusement I've ever found. Besides you'd merely discombobulate her.
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Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Jun-03/1:08 PM |
Ouch. Yet again Mistaken for a Girl, But thanks for the suggestions they really are helpfull.
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Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
23-Jun-03/3:47 AM |
I decided to keep lines 1-11, and then went to 20. I like this much better thanx. I thought it was long winded myself, but its too many ideas put together at once for me to decide what to edit presently. Baby Steps. Thanx Alot.
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Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-Jun-03/12:47 PM |
Disregard that Last statement I thought I saw a few but nope. No typos. I still have no clue what your talking about as far as Grammer.
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Re: a comment on Operation Candy Apple Tango by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
22-Jun-03/12:40 PM |
Shit I see several. Damn Damn Damn. I work it in word so I'm actually quite suprised. I'll fix those right away.
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Re: a comment on 86'd by Bachus |
22-Jun-03/11:20 AM |
3rd stanza followed very closely by the 4th, then not 2nd, and lightyears behind was the 1st. But it works out in a progression of funny, funnier, Oh dear god I'm laughing so hard I think I just busted a nut myself funny, and the funniest possible ending in this situation. Many Props. Easily One of the best things I've read on poemranker to date. I'd say this is close to being as good as D.A.'s Nude Envelopment Site.
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Re: Elephant Man by Kitch |
22-Jun-03/9:54 AM |
Well written, but seems more a lyric to me(or at least thats how I imagine it). -8-
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Re: Fusion by Kitch |
22-Jun-03/9:51 AM |
Wow! Depth, and Rhyme, Worked out seemlessly. True still a few cliche lines but over all, Nice. Best I've read by you so far. -9-
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Re: Women Fight Dirty by scitz |
22-Jun-03/9:46 AM |
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Re: 86'd by Bachus |
22-Jun-03/9:43 AM |
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA here take HAHAHAHAHA this HAHAHAHAHAHAHA before HAHAHAHA I HAHAHAHA die HAHAHA of Laughter HAHAHAHAHAHAHA -10- HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Re: Wigging out by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
22-Jun-03/9:39 AM |
Damn I just thought some body threw that wig out! I knew I should have found out whom it was. Pity me. Insanely funny by the way. -10-
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Re: Angels Struggle by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/9:25 AM |
Well written but lacking emotion. -7-
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Re: OM by SupremeDreamer |
22-Jun-03/9:21 AM |
Poem didn't do anything for me what-so-ever, But the conversation with D.A. was LMAO!!! For that alone a -10-
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Re: a comment on Shut Up (Angry Progression) by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
20-Jun-03/5:31 PM |
I rarely do. In fact I think that I've done that about 3 times ever(thats not counting when I did have that spree in the begining when I cleaned up several little petty arguement made with D.A. and myself). If you are refering to the pot comment it was made on "Something you'll never understand" and its still there. I know I replyed to the one here about how this wasn't written about D.A. but I have no clue why I deleted it. I seriously try not too Delete comments or my replies unless the user recieves e-mail notices and I feel that they are the only one the comment was intended for.
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Re: a comment on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
20-Jun-03/5:23 PM |
Okay!?! Hail Pot!! Hail!! Hail!!
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Re: a comment on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
19-Jun-03/7:10 AM |
Come Come Now Dear Old Chap, Would you expect anything less. Now as for the Ironing, if my trousers had fallen I'd just be my iron on the ironing board and AHH! FIRE! THE IRONING BOARD IS ON FIRE! AHH! NO THE CURTAINS! AHHHHHHHH! THE SEMBLANCE OF MY DIGNITY! oh well since the flame is already going, might as Well light up a J and say fuck it.
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