Re: a comment on Baginga by JoyLuck	18-Jun-03/11:00 PM
Yes, quite apparent, I had hoped for something truely insulting, but seeing as to how You can't write poetry, (trying yeah might help but I doubt it unless you are D.A. or his Heir apparent because your poems do have a mildly similar demeanor to his), I shouldn't be surprised that you either lack the ability to go beyond basic name calling or for the sake of arguement are merely too lazy to do so(in which case why bother responding at all).
Re: a comment on Baginga by JoyLuck	18-Jun-03/10:41 PM
Yes, Yes, Shame, Shame, Poor Retarded me.
Re: a comment on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Jun-03/10:37 PM
Aww... aren't you so cute! Yes you are! Does his Mighty One want a cookie? You are so precious, D.A. Really you are. Don't let anyone tell you different. I would go back to my livejournal but can't you tell that my life centers around you sunshine. As for the irony? What Irony?
Re: a comment on Something You'll never understand by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Jun-03/10:19 PM
Hmmm. Again a nice interpretation, closer than the other guesses but I'm afraid that you've only touched one of the many things involved here.
Re: Baginga by JoyLuck	18-Jun-03/3:54 AM
And you claim I'm gay and write shitty. HaHa, what irony.
Re: a comment on Shut Up (Angry Progression) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Jun-03/3:44 AM
Yo Yo Yo Mix master of disaster Mike If your going to try being witty okay But you seem to miss it so let me just say Your a bloody twit and I bet you've sucked more dick than I have anyday Yo Yo Yo Yo Shut Up
Re: a comment on Shut Up (Angry Progression) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	18-Jun-03/3:37 AM
Typo Thanks.
Re: Air sickness bag by Shardik	17-Jun-03/10:01 PM
Indeed fine sir. Indeed. -9-
Re: a comment on Shut Up (Angry Progression) by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Jun-03/9:53 PM
If your looking for story read Either "my nieghborhood"(Though 1 is much better) or "sublime street morals"(One of the best I've done) and to a much lesser extent alot of my other poems.
Re: a comment on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Jun-03/1:35 PM
No being ignorant myself your highness, I love my ignorant fellows. You want me to stop posting. Right away my Lord. This Instant. I mean fuck freedom of speech, or expression. Please put more words in my mouth Master so that I might enjoy the stinging taste of your cruel, vindictive wit, which I so Earnstly Deserve. P.S. I loved your reading of netwined poem. Absolutly Riveting, and Dare I say Funny(What is sad is that isn't sarcasm I really was busting a gut for well over 2 minutes).
Re: Fate Sucks by Kitch	17-Jun-03/1:26 PM
Kitch, Take my advice, lose the ryhme. Sometimes it works for you but most often it hampers, instead of helping your poems. It just tend to hold them back. Nice image "drown in sunshine on the lake" by the way. -7-
Re: Iceman by Kitch	17-Jun-03/12:48 PM
Again horrible 1st stanza, I'd ditch it all together. Other than that not bad, borderline cliche, at parts the ryhming works, in others I wish you'd just come out say what your saying how you'd say it naturally(i.e. you stopped ryhming third stanza, and it should have stuck that way). -7-
Re: This aint love, its shit by Kitch	17-Jun-03/12:42 PM
Learn to be "Friends with Benifits" -6-
Re: The Bastard Earth by Kitch	17-Jun-03/12:36 PM
I hated the first stanza, it was shit to be honest but the rest works well for the most part. There are some nice lines here, and some shitty ones too. I loved "Identity was divorced from liberty", quite smashing indeed. As for Angels I can see you haven't met our own -=Dark_Angel=- and all I can say is may -=Jesu=- Be as kind to you as I am. -9-
Re: a comment on Dressing up by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Jun-03/12:24 PM
I love ignorant people. Take a Closer look. The words Hat, Business Suit, and Gentleman's Shoes(which should actually be shoe)are all Capitalised. Instead of my typical random capitalisation it has a purpose. Here is another hint for you, innocence's grave, dancing, succes, failure. If your still missing it your mind isn't far enough in the gutter.
Re: a comment on Seven by Dangzter	16-Jun-03/5:58 PM
Nope Dying is just a major buzz kill.
Re: It's funny by Dangzter	16-Jun-03/10:47 AM
Your right it is. I actually laughed out loud reading this. In fact I'd just like to take the time to say Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha Okay, nope not yet Hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahaha Here just take your -10-
Re: Seven by Dangzter	16-Jun-03/10:43 AM
Hey, sup man, its a bit smoky in here. You gonna pass that joint or what?
Re: To Mouse and Reason by Spindle	15-Jun-03/11:47 AM
Pimple Poem Buddy. Felt by you and every one else. Love the Title, Hate the Drivel beneath. Not trying to be mean but I've got a bummer sticker that says the same damn thing without being nearly as long or annoyingly repeative, while stating the obvious.
Re: New school nursery rhymes by DeadtotheWorld	15-Jun-03/11:40 AM
Could have been done better, should have ryhmed better in some places (i.e. Jack be nimble, but he just synched his) and You forgot some major ones such as Humpty Dumpty, Litte Mack Horner, and Little Miss Blew Sheep. -1- just because you took my Idea and fucked it up. J/K -7-.