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Air sickness bag (Free verse) by Shardik
Sitting next to you on that airplane? Could only be compared to being cooked alive by pygmies with no salt, or culinary etiquette. And when you started comparatively analyzing yourself with models in your magazines? Was right about the time when I asked for a pillow, and a blanket.

Up the ladder: overwhelmed
Down the ladder: Children in the Storm

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 6.999753
Overall Rank: 87
Posted: June 16, 2003 3:29 PM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2003 3:29 PM PDT
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Comments:
[10] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 16-Jun-03/7:39 PM | Reply
at least a.s.bs. are disposable.
[7] OneFingerAnswer @ 216.138.10.3 > INTRANSIT | 17-Jun-03/12:52 AM | Reply
You mean not every one collects those?
[8] RealmOfSong @ 64.254.42.118 | 16-Jun-03/8:52 PM | Reply
Very funny ^_^
[8] Kitch @ 62.105.88.10 | 17-Jun-03/9:01 AM | Reply
Change line 10 to Twas about the time' I think it adds a bit more garlic to the salt the pygmies used.

Pretty funny

8 :-)
[7] richa @ 195.92.194.12 | 17-Jun-03/10:52 AM | Reply
cute
[9] thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 24.209.21.223 | 17-Jun-03/10:01 PM | Reply
Indeed fine sir. Indeed. -9-
[7] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 10-Dec-03/6:33 AM | Reply
Amusing, yes, amusing.
[6] andrewjthomas @ 67.74.32.149 | 10-Jan-04/10:06 PM | Reply
cute
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